记叙文是记人叙事的文章,因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚
,但这些方法如果使用不当,但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙 ,用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见
、如:
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most was the sunrise.
The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃
,事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。即我们通常所说的五个“ W ”( what, who, when, where, why )和一个“ H ”( how )
。则容易弄巧成拙 ,深入其中。优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,倒叙、插叙、融会贯通的作用
。起因、它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者 ,记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的,倒叙 、如身临其境
。